A nice enough article but all the punctuation errors and random prepositions indicate a complete lack of editing prior to publication. That undermines the story you’re trying to tell. I recommend Eats, Shoots and Leaves as a primer on how to use punctuation and I recommend re-reading everything twice prior to publishing in order to catch and remove leftover prepositions from earlier versions of the draft.

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